Thursday, November 12, 2009

Draft #492

Here is the new revised version of the script. Learn it, memorize it. If you find any problems with it, email me using your gaggle account or something. You all should have my email. Or tell Jon to tell me, but Jon doesn't have the bestest memory... so email me, ok? We haven't assigned roles yet and the grammar is horrible, but remember, this is only a rough draft. Each she can be replaced with he, and each blank replaced with someone's name. Et cetera. You get the picture. I'm going to keep it short because i have a boat load of homework to tackle. Good Luck!

Car #1 Driver: Zoie (car,  1 shirt +1 blouse)

Car #2 Driver: I’okepa (car, 1 shirt + 1 button shirt)

Student #1: Kara (small backpack, math worksheet)

Student #2: Cierra (small backpack)

Narrator: Jonathan

JPO: Brensten (JPO vest, hat, stop sign) 

INTRODUCTION:

Jonathan:  Hi!  We’re the Jagbots!

(Zoie wheels into narrator)

Jonathan: Ow!!!

Zoie: Sorry!  My daughter is going to be late for soccer and I’ve been waiting so long in this pick-up lane. Where is she anyway? We’ve got to go and I can’t find her.

Jonathan: (rubbing his leg) Oh, wow!  Our pick-up lane seems to be so inefficient and dangerous.  Look!  School’s out! 

PART 1 

(Kara and Cierra walk up behind Zoie’s car)

Kara: Hey, Cierra!  I don’t get our math homework.  Can you help me?

Cierra: Oh, it’s easy.  Just add those 2 numbers, times it by 4 divide it by 5 and add 50.

Kara: Oh, I get it now.  Thanks!

Cierra: Hey, look! A car!

(I’okepa drives up with a screech)

Kara and Cierra: AHHHH!!!!!!  (Kara and Cierra run to the back then move to the side of the room)

Zoie: Hey, you lolo kids! What are you doing walking in the middle of the road?!

I’okepa: BEEP! BEEP! There’s so much traffic!

Kara: It’s so hot! Why isn’t my mom coming to pick me up?  This is taking so long!

Cierra: Soccer practice starts in 5 minutes and I’m going to be late!  Mom, why have you abandoned me?

Zoie: Oh, shoots! I’m all out of gas!

I’okepa: Hey, you’re blocking the lane.  Next time turn off your AC, motor and music when you’re idling! BEEP! BEEP!

Kara: No! The agony! The carbon monoxide is burning my lungs! I can’t breathe AND I’m late for gymnastics!

Zoie: Hey, I can’t help it! I’m just trying to pick up my kid.  I can’t find him.  This traffic is unreal!

I’okepa: (addressing imaginary other kids) Hey, you kids, stop goofing around and get in the car!

Cierra: Ugh, it’s so hot and I’m so tired.  The carbon monoxide fumes are so bad.  I just can’t move or think.

Jonathan: The kids are blaming the parents and the drivers are blaming each other.  What a horrible situation! So how can we fix this?

EVERYONE: We need to fix this problem NOW!

(Zoie and I’okepa move off the stage to change)

Jonathan:  Our Jagbot team discussed this problem and came up with a solution.  To create a second drop off area, the parking stalls were moved forward slightly to create a second lane leading to the extra drop off area.  The students are asked to wait in the first pick-up lane if their last name begins with an A-M and to wait in the second pick-up lane if their last name begins with J-Z.  An adult supervisor is stationed where the lanes cross to control traffic.  The cars are asked to display the last name of the children they are to pick up.

Brensten: (holding the pick-up A-M sign) As one of the JPOs,  I’m stationed at the beginning of a pick-up lane and I’ll call out the name of the student so he or she can come up to the pick-up curb and thus reduce waiting time.

Jonathan: 5 months (and a lot of cooperation) later!

PART II

Jonathan: It looks like there are two lanes now and the lanes are organized by the last names of the students.  That should help with traffic.

Brensten: Kara! Kara, come to the pick-up. Your mom is pulling up next.  Hey, Kara, get your backpack cuz your mom is coming soon.

(Zoie drives up)

Zoie: Hi, Kiddo! Guess what? It’s a whole 30 minutes until gymnastics.

Kara: Wow! That’s great! I can actually make it for warm-ups.

(Kara starts to get in the car)

JPO: Cierra, where are you? Cierra, come to the pick-up! Your dad’s almost here!

(Cierra walks up as Zoie drives off)

I’okepa: Hey, we have extra time before soccer practice.  Do you want to stop at McDonald’s for a snack?

Cierra: Sure Dad! Can I get a McFlurry?

(Cierra gets in the car and they drive off) 

CONCLUSION:

Jonathan: Things seem to be so much better now.

Brensten: Wasn’t it some First Lego League team’s idea to do these two lanes a few years ago?

Jonathan: Yeah, they are at college now.  We’re so grateful!

Brensten: Collaboration and teamwork sure pays off.

Everyone faces the judges with their props and bows.

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